Serenity N Faa'ao's Motivation for writing. Rock Climber/Success

Your task this week is to use this photo as your motivation for writing

Will we be writing stand alone paragraphs, each with a different purpose.
Once you have completed your draft on this page, publish your paragraphs in the presentation shared to you and post it on your blog.

Purpose 1: Describe the setting.Vocab:  spectacular lofty peaks snow-clad treacherous overhanging rock still day
Purpose 2: Describe the action from the rock climber’s point of view.

muscles straining/aching tenuous grip grasped tightly sweat dripping focussed heaved perilous

determination and perseverance treacherous challenging

sun beating down braced myself rock face

Purpose 1: Discuss your understanding of the quote:in my opinion conveys the message highlights the importance of

in order to it is essential that can’t rely solely on

personally I feel that

As I climbed the rock my hands started to sweat and then slip of the rock.

I heaved myself up hand up back onto the rock and gripped back onto the rock

and said to myself will this be the end

I changed my attitude and went for it

I pushed myself up onto the rock and I made it to the top

Quote:

In my opinion he message means not to give up and never letting go of your dream

As I climbed the mountain I could feel some sweat dripping down my forehead. When I felt the sweat dripping I said to myself I could make it.