Memories - School Journal Part 3 number 1 2006
What words are used instead of “said”
Snarled, Yelled, Mouthed, called, whispered,
What are the story elements in the story?
Memories
Setting: In her room, on her bed, in the sitting room, doorway
Plot: Mum was trying to reach for the manoeuvre for her wheelchair so that she could reach into the drawer, Sophia watched her for a moment from the doorway. Then she walked over. “ I’ll do that” she said “You go and sit down” there was a pause. A grin passed between them. Then they both laughed.
Conflict: When Mum Yelled out “you can clean that room as well”
When Sophia, snarled “Whatever!”
Character: Sophia, and Mum
Theme: Memories
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